Hi Andie, this is incredibly raw and brave. You’ve captured that quiet, invisible damage the inner critic can do with real clarity, and the way it tangles with trauma and relationship dynamics is laid out powerfully. The structure works well too. Reflective and personal, but grounded in hard-won insight.
That final shift toward a new internal voice feels hard-earned and honest, not wrapped up with a bow. Just real. Maybe a touch long in places, but it doesn’t matter - the heart of it lands. Thank you for sharing.
Hi Andie, this is incredibly raw and brave. You’ve captured that quiet, invisible damage the inner critic can do with real clarity, and the way it tangles with trauma and relationship dynamics is laid out powerfully. The structure works well too. Reflective and personal, but grounded in hard-won insight.
That final shift toward a new internal voice feels hard-earned and honest, not wrapped up with a bow. Just real. Maybe a touch long in places, but it doesn’t matter - the heart of it lands. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you for your kind words ✨